Jumping up to the sky |
Picking the sun from the sky |
making some creative experiments with the sun |
The sunset marks the end of the day stops me from doing anything more with the sun |
A series of reviews, thoughts and images from my time completing a foundation diploma in Art & Design at Ravensbourne
Jumping up to the sky |
Picking the sun from the sky |
making some creative experiments with the sun |
The sunset marks the end of the day stops me from doing anything more with the sun |
This is a very original and playful story which I think would appeal to most people. I like the use of your photography skills utilising the slow shutter well to generate some strong images. This is a very strong page where all the images line up nicely and the description sell the story well without saying too much. I don't think there is much to improve here, the brief states 6 images only but if you had more images to work with I would say that you should bring the protagonist to life bringing another aspect out of the story. But overall good keep good work up fam.
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